Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing words.
I can see a red motorbike as it roars noisily up the road. I can hear the loud buses and smell the yucky smoke in my nose. The smoke gets in my mouth. It tastes like petrol.
By Michael
The little Red Hen made the bread by herself. The little Red Hen did not share with the animals because they did not help help her. So the Little Red Hen ate the bread by herself.
By Michael
Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing words.
In the weekend my family and I went to the beach.
I made a sand castle like the Sky Tower. I swam and splashed in the warm water with my sister. We had yummy chicken and chips for lunch. It was a hot day. We were tired.
We packed up and went back home.
By Michael
Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe popcorn using our five senses.
I like popcorn. It tastes buttery and salty. It smells like butter. It looks white and yellow. It is crunchy when its warm.
Michael
I went to the park with my family. I climbed up the ladder. I went on the slide. I went down fast. I had fun.
Michael
