I am a Year 4 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 6 and my teacher is Mrs Agnew.
Monday, 7 May 2018
The Noisy Traffic
Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing words.
I can see a red motorbike as it roars noisily up the road. I can hear the loud buses and smell the yucky smoke in my nose. The smoke gets in my mouth. It tastes like petrol.
By Michael
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Hello there Michael, Well done! Your descriptive text about the traffic noise outside St. Patricks School is full of interesting words to describe the atmosphere around you. Keep up the great work.
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